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The Woman Within


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Falling leaves drop to the ground,

Golden embers of glowing red, orange and yellow

The winds of change blow gently

Carrying each separate leaf away from the tree

Plucked from its branches, its root of life

Carried away only to shrivel and crumble to dust

In the cold winds that swirl around.

The changing of the seasons, they say…

The fallen autumn leaves like my past

Crumpled forgotten dust drifting

Through the winds that blow in my mind

Cold, hibernated, hidden in a harsh bitter world

As I struggle to hold myself together

Through the painful journey of my recovery

Trying to reclaim the very essence of myself

Changes again...

A different change

Not cold, not bitter, not sad,

But warm and comforting

The sun comes out from behind the clouds

To shine brightness upon everything

Dissipating the darkness, the hurt, the pain

New buds appear on the trees

Flowers sprout up out of the earth

To peep out at their new surroundings

Fresh grass growth covers the ground

A rebirth of sorts

Changes bringing forth new life

New hope and new dreams

A change for the better

Changing me…

 

 

 

PolarB © 2008

Posted by PolarB at 7:44 PM - 13 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Oh Polar,
That was beautiful, and refreshing. As I read that poem (twice), I took more of the words in. Thanks for the share!
 
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by Crone (PM , CC ) on Friday June 6, 2008 @ 7:48 PM




You are welcome Crone! I've been in a writing mood lately and when the creative juices flow I've got to listen.

I am glad you liked it. Thank you for visiting my poetry site.

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB ;) (PM , CC ) on Friday June 6, 2008 @ 7:51 PM




Well your a lady of many talents, I enjoy all of them!!!! by the way thanks for all your help i have a lot to learn.I'm glad for your help alog the way.
your friend allison
 
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by Allison's Kitchen (PM , CC ) on Monday June 9, 2008 @ 9:46 PM




I like this one...to me it speaks of hope..and hope is the thing that pulls us through troubled times..thanks PolarB..(((hugs))))...hope your day was a good one  
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by Cracker (PM , CC ) on Monday June 9, 2008 @ 9:50 PM




Ahhh I see you've wondered into my poetry zone! Glad you like it Allison!

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Wednesday June 11, 2008 @ 6:52 PM




Thanks Cracker for drifting into my poetry zone. I am glad you liked the poem.

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Wednesday June 11, 2008 @ 6:53 PM




Excellent piece PolarB. Very spiritual and uplifting. I like how you compared the leafs to your past.
Sad put refreshing. I'm glad I stopped in to say hello.

 
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 29, 2008 @ 4:10 AM




Awesome picture 1Man and thank you for your kind words.
I hope you have a fantabulous Sunday afternoon too!

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 29, 2008 @ 5:39 PM




PB, That was beautiful! Thanks for sharing hon!
Oscar Sue
 
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by Oscar (PM , CC ) on Sunday July 6, 2008 @ 8:24 PM




Polar
You make magic with the words! Good girl!
Blessings
Beverly
 
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by Older and Wiser (PM , CC ) on Tuesday August 5, 2008 @ 3:49 PM




Thanks Oscar! Sorry I didn't answer sooner but I just discovered you left a comment on my poetry site!

Bear HUgs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Wednesday August 6, 2008 @ 7:06 AM




Thank you Beverly! I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Hang around if you want and make yourself comfortable. My door is always open.

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Wednesday August 6, 2008 @ 7:07 AM




That's ok hon, I have a different site too with poetry and don't often go there.
Thanks for replying to let me know you got my message. *smile*

Oscar Sue
 
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by Oscar (PM , CC ) on Wednesday August 6, 2008 @ 10:46 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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