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Shapeless Shifting Shadows

Shapeless shifting shadows
among the creaking trees
I nearly lost my bladder
with the shaking of my knees

Upon the mighty grave I crawled
I heard a mourning cry
It was the sound of darkened death
I felt the piercing of my eye

Quickly upon me it pounced and gnawed
I fought it tooth and nail
it's claws that shredded my sweet skin
then left me there impaled

My soul left my tattered body
which was nothing but a shell
while all along the demons laughed
as I joined them there in Hell

Shapeless shifting shadows
among the shifting trees
Will you be the demon's next victim
Or be tortured with disease.

© Copyright 2007 PolarB (UN: polarb at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.

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*** Note -This was a poem I wrote for a dark poetry contest in which I won third place and a merit badge.
Posted by PolarB at 12:26 PM - 6 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Excellant work and CONGRATS!  
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by ^BELLE^ (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 12:42 PM




Dang girl why do we always do that!! I am at your place and you are at mine!

Thanks! It isn't my typical type of poetry I prefer but I thought I did okay for the first time writing dark poetry. Not bad for a challenge.

Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 12:49 PM




Way to go PolarB! Hey, that was a forboding skin.
I love the dark side when I write poems.
I guess that's the Edgar Alan in me. I loved
his Rum-soaked writing. (Probably a little Cocaine too)
Excellent effort and congradulations,
Joe
 
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by joesblog6 (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 8, 2008 @ 12:58 PM




Thanks Joe. I've not had alot of experience writing dark poetry but I did enjoy the challenge. They have dark poetry contests going on all the time on my writing portfolio site, so I may just write more.

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 12, 2008 @ 5:20 PM




Very nice piece. Very creative. I haven't visited this side of you before. I didn't know you had more then one blog.
My Bad! I'm making an effect to surf more on this site, unfortunate, this is the get busy time of the year for me.
But I shall return for sure. Have a happy Memorial Day. Please take time to reflect what this day really means.
Memorial Day
 
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday May 25, 2008 @ 12:17 PM




Hey 1Man... thank you for visiting my poetry site. Actually I have 5 blogs here on the stream. I write under the name of Mrs Doubtfire too but it is a recipe blog. The rest I write under PolarB.

Glad you liked the poem. I really need to get back to writing alot more.

Bear Hugs!
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Friday May 30, 2008 @ 9:11 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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